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 Here is another one of my stories I wrote today! Please comment! :)                             


                                        Juliana’s Adventure in Manyville




It was a normal uneventful day, and Juliana was washing dishes (as usual.) Her younger brother Sam was doing school work. Even though Juliana disliked washing dishes her mom had assigned her to doing them that day. Juliana was an extremely imaginative girl, therefore while she was doing dishes she floated away into her own little world. It was called Manyville. The reason it was called that was because there lived bunches of many people. The Many people were hobbits and dwarves mixed together. As you know hobbits like to stay home while dwarves are incredibly adventures, so since the Many people are mixed together they are a little adventure and a little stay at home people. Juliana was just a girl but sometimes when she dreamt really hard she could dream herself right in the Many people’s world.
Juliana is walking around in the giant mushroom field with some other Many peoples. “What a beautiful day,” exclaimed Juliana.

Suddenly she heard a high pitched scream that came out of nowhere. Juliana saw a cluster of bushes ahead and look behind them. A middle sized Many person was about to get flung in a huge iron pot by an ignoramus org, (which is an awfully ugly creature that is terribly mean to poor Many people.) Juliana walked right up to that terrible org and screamed, “you put that Many person down right this second or I’ll call your father!” You see orgs are exceedingly cowardly animals, (if that’s what you call them) Juliana knew that of course and she knew the exact thing to say. As a result of Juliana saving the Many person, Juliana went back into her own world and to back to washing dishes.